Gary has it all : fame, money, and a brand new contract with a big football team. What about spending his last summer before the real start of his football career back in his small hometown? What could go wrong?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Going to need a sequel Wokod, don't leave me hanging please.
Ayy yo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is my favorite story of yours that you've put on the site. I really like the height growth with the personality growth. It was a cool concept making a blank slate into someone's greatest fantasy. Keep it up!
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Now this is a story right up to my likings! I enjoyed it very much, thank you!
Is there any chance to write a second chapter? Like, how Jill is going to conquer the football club, or the city, one by one? Also your spelling was good with only some mistakes in it.
Josh and Anita Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
That was Fantastic! Great job with the character and the story!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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