The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

8 Ball
Travis' life is a mess. But what if he had a magic 8 ball able to answer his every question... in a very vivid way?
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Hmm.  Hot, sexy, thought provoking,.  But for some reason, low on fappability.  Not sure why?
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This one was fantastic, on par with several of the Josh and Kate chapters from the Dictaphone. 

Actually reminded me a lot of greg mixed with Josh. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
great plot. pace and consistency.
will definitely have to add this one to by collection after a few grammar edits
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Thank you for yet another wonderful story. I like the world you have created it has a nostalgic feel of older, more shameless, internet stories like the ones by Ed Miller, but with a modern setting. It's a rare treat.

I'm a fan of TG, BE, and Yuri, so this kind of story was pretty close to a bowling strike in regards to my tastes. I'm glad to have read it. Thank you.
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