Lara is a PhD student. When she finds an old stone from a prehistoric fertility cult...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
There were few grammar or spelling mistakes within this story and overall the BE descriptions were very good. The way that the tale ends does cheat a little with the GTS and Wow! tags, but it is not enough to detract from my enjoyment of the scene, characters and events occurring. The main character we learn a lot about to understand who they are and why they make the choices that they do. The secondary character is not as well developed but still fits into the story enough to not be a detriment. Transformation and change through the story is told well too.
One of my favorite Wokod tales. Thank you again for your contribution.
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great, short story!
Your spelling is not a problem at all, just 23 mistakes there.
I liked the description of Lauras expanding scenes. The one offstage with her friend thinking about those expanding bra sizes was especially nice!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Goos story, keep writing.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed your previous story and this one was no different. Despite English being your second language, I noticed way fewer spelling or grammar mistakes than I would expect from a native speaker.
My only criticism would be the use of the 'gts' tag in your previous story and the use of the 'wow' tag in this story. Since it was only implied in the ending that the heroine in the previous story would grow to planetary proportions or that Emily in this story would grow breasts big enough to feed a third world country. Since neither of these situations were described in detail, I felt cheated as a fan of giantess and ginormous breasts when I saw those tags, so I feel the inclusion of those tags was wholly unnecessary.
In any case, keep up the good work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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