I thought I found the woman on my dreams, boy was I mistaken.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 3.20
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 3.20
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 2
Wonderful story. A few jump cuts that were confusing. The beating could have used more explanation suddenly Barbara becomes evil! Please, please use spellcheck. Your spelling is atrocious very very bad. Hence the 2.
Roars
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Your story with a bit of polishing on the formattingspellcheckgrammar end would be great! I personally really like slice of life stories like this! Keep at it!
vicious
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved the story. Keep writing!
Red
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Unusual.Clever, very wellwritten, but it's quite a stretch to call willgmovie's stuff BE. It's not, it's giantess, with the new to me! fetish of the man getting a serious wasting disease so there's evenmoredramatic contrast between puny guy and tall girl. I'd like to see him put this kind of effort and detail into a real BE story, I give him credit for doing a good job on his own preferences.
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Well, first things fist Please overhaul your story. Its full of spelling mistakes!
Now, the BE doesn't start til 13 in the story, be warned. And its not the focus of the story either. But the penis growth is nice too. The sex scenes are fun and somehow I liked the laid back style in this story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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