My girlfriend out grows me
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.00
cwmoss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story Willgmovie. One of the best that I've read for a long while. It reminds me of some of the stories written by Chelgi, Greapos, SpitfireJonahark or Stewy. A great style and attack I sorely miss.
This was deftly executed with slow growth and a continued hint of an upcoming situation that the male was not entirely prepared to handle.
Beautiful tension throughout and the slightly menacing single mindedness of Racheal made her unimaginably sexy to me.
I can only complain that there was not more to read.
Good job man, take care.
CW
Corner1
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I thought the story as a whole was good, but I didnt like that Rachel became overly aggressive and hostile. I think thats a trope thats pretty boring
not be
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
its got some other stuff but be ain't one.
Ouro
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the story and the steady clip at which Rachel grew into a tall, busty, amazon of a woman. However her character motivation was a bit confusing. I can understand why she would have wanted to be taller, but not why she was so insistent on growing to such a colossal size. It also would have been a bit better if the story spent some more time with Rachel at her bigger size. A followup would be very fun read!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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