An accidental packet of yeast turns into an unexpected growth spurt for two girls!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.75
QBE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This story captures both ends of the expansion spectrumsmall into large, and large into huge! Individually those components are sexy but when put together in the same story, makes it so much hotter!
Bonus points for realism!
xXreaper420Xx
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story! A change from BEengineer's usual formula, but just as great as any of the rest.
Bonus points for a character reacting realistically and reasonably to the situation!
Franco
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Rater
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
3 Enjoyment because its a pity its so short
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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