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The Overflowing Bra

BEengineer
Dinner Date
An April Fool's Day dinner date prank doesn't go quite as expected
Average Scores:
 Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Fun!
 Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great story !
 Vyperion
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Fun, Quick, and HIGHLY enjoyable! It spoke to me. Of course, I'm married, poly and share a name with the main character. So....bias?
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