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The Overflowing Bra

Professor Lilly Lan has managed to resist using her metahuman ability to suck people into her bosom and consume them for a decade, but a mugging gone wrong sets her on a path to relapse. When the Man of Steel catches a glimpse of her hypnotic bosom, she will be faced with temptation too difficult to resist.
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Ideas for the ending of the story

1.  The protagonist has consumed the universe and is seemingly alone.  Suddenly an overwhelmingly powerful male presence appears.  Bearded, muscular, larger than even the allpowerful protagonists.  Ummm.  What a mess you've made of my universe!  Let me fix that.  With a deafening snap of His fingers, the entire universe  nay, the multiverse  reappears.  He then looks upon the protagonist with an appraising look, becoming seemingly spellbound. Wow, you've got some great tits!


The Protagonist is alone.  All the stars are gone.  There is nothing in the universe except her.  She knows all.  She is all.  She exists and ponders the situation.  Then she exclaims, let there be light!  And there was light.
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story was hot as always and hit many of my buttons but I feel like Spoilerthe outgrowing the universe ending is somewhat of a copout when you can't think of a satisfying conclusion
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story as always ! 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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