The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Growing by an Open Fire
A joke store potion leads to some growing fun by a roaring fire.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Nice story. A bit skimpy.

Make to large into too large.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
their weight
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I quite enjoyed it, and hope you'll do more in the future.
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