Ben receives world and shapeshifting powers through poorly defined means. Lots of sex with some odd transformations.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 2.25
- Technical: 2.25
bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Got any other stories? I loved this one.
Zozo
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Not very good. Poor grammar. Disjointed descriptions. Bizarre and distracting word choice. Just... not very good.
A
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Really like the ideas and scenarios, good creativity and relatively fresh. The technical aspects of the writing needs a lot of work, and would be if it significantly from an editor.
Felt very forced
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Felt forced and poorly written. dialogue between characters is something akin to a bad Bmovie
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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