When Kelly's younger sister Rachel shows signs of outstripping her older sister, Kelly takes steps to correct matters.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 2.80
- Technical: 4.20
Dragnea
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm a fan of the dark character. I feel that with anyone who is stealing from someone can't possibly justify it,even if it's fueled by revenge on bullies or something. Overall fun to read, wish it was longer. Not the biggest fan of the whole stealing smarts to become a genius and rich.
hatter
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
I really wanted Rachel to steal it all back in the end. It was so dark and depressing as is
Dz
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
The story is depressing, kind of kills the enjoyment of the growth which was good otherwise.
Gérard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great attribute theft story !
SourMilk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wow! Ignore the critics, I think your writing is great! There's so few Attribute Theft content as is, so it was a pleasant surprise when I came across this story!
It seems that some didn't really enjoy the dark, selfish nature of Kelly but I think its a strength for the story while Attribute Theft is rare, thieving characters like that are even rarer and they're my personal favorite. This story sorta reminds me of Your Traits are Mine by Krista, you may have heard of it and if you've haven't, give it a read!
I look forward to reading more AT stuff from you!
Sacha
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
As said by other fellows. Great style as always. But would have been really better if there was an graduate evolution of Kelly the main character she s just evil and that s it.
or the revenge of Rachel would have been a delectable Twist.
Okonya
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
There's stealing, and then there's just unexplained evil... I really wanted Rachel to turn the tables.
ignore the hater
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
if you aint got haters, you aint poppin
wasnt good
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
just wasn't good. keep trying.
Nikochan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Great style as always. But I find the character of kelly almost too dark, even since the beginning.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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