The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Hunter S. Creek
A short, 2,255-word story (includes a morphed picture) that follows two short, scrawny, nerdy step-siblings over the course of a weekend where she unintentionally drinks his growth formula.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great short story 
Love your work
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
love to see it continue
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I always enjoy a good growth story, but it'd be a heck of a lot better if Percy joins into the fun, despite his concern about not being able to duplicate the formula.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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