Lauren gets a job working in a milk bar over the summer, but her reaction to the drug used to induce lactation of the Happy Milk drug is much stronger than usual.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.75
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Just great, a great story, I only can confirm my fellow commentators!
The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work! The pacing is excellent. The reader has time to appreciate each stage of growth and the development of her body and her power over others while still looking forward to new and greater heights
Nikochan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great work as always ! Hope to read more stories from you in the futur !
Ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I loved this. If I had to think of constructive feedback I'd say that her ending size felt small by BE standards and and I only wish she'd gotten even bigger. rn
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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