When Wendy asks for a conference room to use for her group project, reality goes a little unhinged.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.75
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed it, but, it needs some sex!
Have her meet a guy who had much the same experience in the room, maybe with a young Clark Kent as one of the teammates!
And then proceed with much wallwrecking sex.
MorePlease
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it, BUT this one would've been legendary if the changes were slower and more gradual. I know you have it in you from your other stories, would really like to see this one slowed down and have her try to mentally try to keep pace with the cup sizes. I really like your choice of main character being a busty asian, so nice.
Nikochan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoy your different stories. Great work !
MirandasDream
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Solid writing but I didn't find myself rooting for the hero after the first few pages. Story could have gone some neat places with the wishes unknowingly making people compete for who's in charge, or the ladies with who should be queen bee. The effect of the life sucking could have given more to her as far as character development.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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