Transformation livestock breeder story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.56
- BE: 3.78
- Characters: 4.78
- Technical: 4.44
Culminatra
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done. I appreciate the world building. This could go other places too. All the setup and planning made for a great climax.
MarkyMark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The science lends a ton of credibility to the writing which makes it that much sexier. PLEASE write more like this. It is my favorite story here by an order of magnitude.
Bloom
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the story for the quality of writing, narrative, and the characters. If you haven't written a book, please do. The best parts of the story were the things you'd find in any good book.
Merk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best story on this site, in my opinion. Great scientific descriptions to aid in realism, too.
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
FleshFan
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked your story. It wasn't hot for me, but interesting, so I kept reading for the story and how it would end. If that's not a statement about the quality of your story, eh?rnI think the setup is great and the characters interesting. And I liked that shemale thing at the end.rnThough, the flaw is There is not enough boob growth description in it. Those bags are growing for sure, but it is just a side point, sadly.
wwa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
OK, I almost never review anything, but this is right in my wheelhouse of kinks. Goes well with The Taurus Chronicles. As mentioned in another review, there were some grammatical and spelling issues, but they didn't kill the mood. Well done. Looking forward to more!
Giant Fuzzy Pig
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This really wasn't my thing. NOTE that other people might like this a lot more than I would because every person is different. But the characters worked well, and the worldbuilding was good. I'm pretty sure you could write more stories that people would like a lot, and there's a lot of potential here. There were a few grammatical errors in the text. Not superimportant, just something to consider.
BroncoRich
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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