This story was a collaboration between myself and TierynBE, who also has a few works here. This has been slightly rewritten from the original 2 parter for added story flow (with approval from Tieryn). Follow me on Lord-Nightraven.tumblr.com for comments, questions and even prompt requests.
Note on tags: There is brief instant hourglass growth although the primary focus is on the lactation-related growth. So I've tagged accordingly to be safe. Non-consensual was marked due to the unwilling subject.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Giant Fuzzy Pig
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This works, but it seems a little short. It could use a followup. Maira could probably run a side business helping the local women out if the last few paragraphs are any indication.
some weird grey thing
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great concept, but I felt the large time skip led to it being a bit underutilized. Aside from that, though, the story was great!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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