With the help from her family, Hailey pulls through a series of growth attacks that last a week and leave her breasts at truly ridiculous proportions.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.17
- BE: 3.83
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 4.17
Midnight Sky
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really hoping this one gets continued. It's a great premise with excellent writing so far and I'm eager to see where this all goes next.
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Great story, greatly written. I liked those many orgasms she had. Also the growth and yet more to come!
Maybe there could be a somewhat longer break between those growth spurts? In this time Hailey could do some actions like bathing again, eating, sitting with her tits in her lap and so on... How far would those tits go up then? How big are her nipples compared to her hands and other stuff? Could she lay completely on her tits?
I would even like to wait some more weeks for a little more story in between.
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I get what the last commentator said that she is unconscious for much of the story. But come on practically the whole story is BE and intense, well described BE at that. I think that this is a great installment to what is probably the best current series on this site.
One minor caveat. Women can indeed be hemophiliacs, but it's pretty rare. She must have been really unlucky to have ended up that way.
BuzzBuzz
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The idea of the story was fine... but this chapter really misses what I thought the series had done really well up to this point realistic descriptions of growth. In this chapter, it's almost like she's unconscious practically the whole time, and so the story reads like Oh I'm bigger, damn because she falls unconscious in another spurt. It really takes the suspense away from it, because she's not awake or active enough to really notice worry about the changes between each spurt.
In short, way, way more description of the BE and its effects is required! Especially since breast hypertrophy is the core idea of the story.
the person
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Don't submit files that can only be opened by Word. Some don't own the program and can't open the files. Just fyi. Good luck
Domei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story, please keep it coming. The continued growth is great, but I hope you will continue to put Hailey in situations in which she and others are forced to react to her extreme size. Like returning to school and so forth.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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