Intro part to a BE series that focuses on Juliana starting off gigantically busty, and just getting bigger from there!
The intro part to an old series of three stories I wrote back in 2013. Thought I'd upload one here, see what people thought. I hope you enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.25
FleshFan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A very good start. Though short. Can't wait for more.rnBut please try to look names up, e.g. Louis Vuitton. rnOne question How did she get 7 ft tall? There is no description for that.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked the story. But I wonder what will happen next. Great work, keep it up.
ktc1221
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I loved it. This scale of boob isn't my personal favorite but it was incredibly cute regardless. Felt short, I guess you could say there's some room for expansion imo rimshot
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Incredibly cute. Impossiblesize stories are hard to write, and I can't imagine what the author would do in the other parts. I'm guessing that her milk, given to women around the world, will cause a great deal of growth and growth to the men who drink it, too. Meanwhile, the heroine is going to be in a problem getting planetsized is a little too far out.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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