The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max Mammaries
A notorious sexual harasser angers a righteous witch, and she transforms him into a woman with cripplingly huge breasts.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This would have been a great story, but the transformation was far too rushed, and you didn't go much further past it. You are a good writer, please keep creating.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Despite being short, I enjoyed this story, since there's ever enough TG stories where the man becomes a petite girl with gigantic, fat breasts. If I ran into the witches, I would've asked them to make me even smaller and cuter, below 150cm, with breasts as big as the ones Jeff got, but coupled with hips wider than my shoulder width, and big, round butt, and thunder thighs. Instead of a punishment, I would think it would be a dream come true! ... All that said, both this and the previous story you wrote had problems when I downloaded them where the contents of the doc file are corrupted. I had to open them in Word, and convert them to text before opening it in Firefox to use text encoding to switch to Western encoding to fix most of it, but even then, I had all of the punctuation with quotes converted to the letter E, which made your stories slightly more difficult to read than they would be otherwise. I would appreciate it if you included just a plain txt file for your future stories with no formatting to hopefully fix this.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This could have been really good. It feels like you had to meet a deadline and just wrote this too fast.  I love the premise and the M to F.  I just wish it moved slower and took more time to describe growth and changes.
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