My first attempt, and my first posting on this site. Not too much of a plot, just a happy couple working through the advantages of exceeding the recommended dosage. Comments welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.40
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
MissLany
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The character and plot are pretty simple, andstory starts after a lot of expansion already happened. The expansion that is in the story isn't described in a lot of detail outside of them just growing. That said, the story was still very well done and descriptive. Definitely good quality for something this short, and an excellent start. Keep it up.
TW
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Superb first story! And of course it helps that you happen to hit many of my prime triggers e.g. intentional overdose, growth by pleasure so I really hope you'll keep writing! D
Buffering
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Especially for a first attempt excellent story. You didn't over describe anything, you didn't overdo exposition, and yet you got the reader straight into it. Just really well done.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done! Great story! Don't be afraid to go longer, and in to more detail.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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