Sorry it took so long to get this here. Time for the transfer part!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
vito
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the idea of girl stealing from others.
Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Terrible. Not only is the female character a bully who at one point kidnaps the protagonist to get her way, she then causes multiple women to become flatchested. What an incredible turnoff. This site is about breast expansion, and your one female benefactor is not only unlikeable, the protag spineless and illogical, but you also REDUCED the overall breast size of your world. Grammatically, your work was fine, but please make better characters
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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