The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Boob Transfusion? Vol. 2
Sorry it took so long to get this here. Time for the transfer part! 
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the idea of girl stealing from others.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Terrible. Not only is the female character a bully who at one point kidnaps the protagonist to get her way, she then causes multiple women to become flatchested. What an incredible turnoff. This site is about breast expansion, and your one female benefactor is not only unlikeable, the protag spineless and illogical, but you also REDUCED the overall breast size of your world. Grammatically, your work was fine, but please make better characters
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