Gymnast Kelly cheats on her boyfriend. He gets revenge by making sure she'll REALLY need him... Not a happy story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.64
- BE: 3.73
- Characters: 4.27
- Technical: 4.91
passing lesbian
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Story was great, technical quality was great. I'd love for a followup where her breasts get even bigger, although I understand the story is pretty complete as it is. Beautifully done on the humiliation aspect.
Good Taste
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic. The realism and attention to detail makes this stand out among most of the other stories here.
The fact that you use a less is more approach was such a breath of fresh air. She didn't just wake up with J cups, you started with Cs and had a slow burn. Of course, I'd love a followup story in which she gets bigger hopefully not too big, I love the realism, again, but your prose really depicts how DD's ARE huge for her.
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mrhymie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The only problem with this, is waiting for more....
Awesome!
Sally Nobody
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It's a rare and wonderful story that can make me feel excited imagining myself in either position. Bravo!
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Too rapey for my liking. The rational for revenge was really weak. Dating for a couple months warrants a revenge? Really? The lack of intelligence from both main characters and the plot holes were a bit too much as well. At least the grammar was pretty good.
dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderfully written. Really enjoyed it from start to finish. The only criticism I'd have is echoed in other reviews here size descriptiondetail could be fleshed out heh
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this quite a bit. I wouldn't mind a revenge story where she curses him into a stud who fulfills her desires.
stuff
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good Job
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
M
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been waiting for a story like this for ages. The execution of the story is fantastic and fairly unique. 128076127997
BEn
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the story. There were basically no grammatical mistakes and the pace was pretty good. My only complaint is that the actual expansion itself could be more descriptive, perhaps some size comparisons or something to show how massive they truly are. But it will be interesting to see more work from you in the future.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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