A couple, Alex and Rebecca, have to spend a night at a motel in the middle of nowhere. Everything seems normal enough, except for the receptionist. How will they react to Rebecca being bimbified?
Includes an illustration by Sortimid (check them out on deviantart)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.75
- Technical: 4.50
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Pretty good. I liked the drawing at the beginning, but was hoping for one of her transformed at the end. I hope this is just part 1. The ending makes me think that Alex was in on the bimbofication from the beginning.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this story. It has the feel of a story that would make a great serial, to be done by you or others, either linked or not. Just make the rule you can't kill off the doctor.
Corwyn
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The BE felt a bit rushed, as did Alex's acceptance of Rebecca's transformation. Even so, overall I quite liked it, and would love to see more.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great short story. Well written . Can't wait for more in this series!
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