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The Overflowing Bra

Up at the Big House Chapters 1-17
Written by barrowclough. This series is available over at Chili Palmer's Free story Archive at bearchive.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could you post barrowcloughs rule 101 stories?
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Eh. Chili Palmer quickly became a CPlite incest hotspot where preteens and teenagers got pregnant so I'm good on this sort of nonsense. Glad the free site is still up, there's bits of Babycakes that are still fun, but the rest of the site is a trashfire.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
This is porn as might have written by Tom Sharp. I haven't laughed so much in years. It is the funniest thing I've read since his book Indecent Exposure or any of the Wilt novels. And yet it is WRONG on so many moral levels. Perhaps that is why I found it so funny! Technical score is low because Sentences and names should start with CAPITAL letters!!! Otherwise the style was great! Sick, but funny too.
Russian Judge
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
If this is a parody of Downtown Alley or whatever that thing on PBS was called, it doesn't work. Way too many titles of people, too much stilted language, and it was impossible to find any appealing characters. Sorry, I don't like giving negative reviews despite my nickname, but this was a turnoff.
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