The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Joker
Unknown
Virus, The
A madman looses a virus which transforms all women into sexy, brainless bimbos.
Average Scores:
 krata
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
good, but not super exciting 
 kitty
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
good job
 Shini
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Excuse me for being picky, but this was boring.
 beateroffer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
damn good jiz session
 Dire
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
A damn fine story, one of my favorites on OB.
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