Written by barrowclough. This series is available over at Chili Palmer's Free story Archive at bearchive.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.67
- BE: 1.67
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.33
Anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
BD, this is a repost from Chili Palmer's Free Story Archive. The censored words are due to a bot indiscriminately censoring certain trouble words throughout that entire page. The censorship wasn't meant for overflowingbra which has many smutty stories like this in nature uploaded in the distant past. I believe something happened at Chili Palmer's page way, way back in 2004 that led to it being temporarily taken down before it was brought back up with the laughable bot censorship to poorly fit in with the guidelines of BEArchive's epayment processor. It's like if your grandma decided you didn't need to see the word butt and then made a bot to remove all butts from all of your reading material which also removes words like butterfly and buttered toast. As a little bit of trivia, this messed up tale was written by a woman, or someone that pretended to be one, who was a major contributing author in breast expansion history way back in the 90s.
BD
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
If you know you need to censor a word even on a site like this you shouldn't be writing it!
Qoper
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Not my fare at all. I dropped out at the mention of preteen incestpregnancy
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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