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The Overflowing Bra

ExPFCWintergreen
The Body Politic
Senator Shelly Broadstreet is a hard charging feminist running for president of the United States who happens to have unusually huge breasts, and she looks like a lock to win.  Her opponent tries to save his own campaign by getting help from a mysteriously odd man to infiltrate her campaign and humiliate the Senator.  What happens when that backfires?
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Goonygoogoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
So awesome!!! Off to your DA!!
Browser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fuckin' great. Read through everything else you've got on DA, and I love your work. Keep it up!
Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I greatly enjoyed this story, and I thought you did a wonderful job with the descriptions of size and weight. The obsession of the main female character to continue expanding her body was handled very beautifully, as well as the elements of conflict within her mind as things started to unravel. Would love to see you write more of this type of story, or perhaps even a continuation.rn
lc
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Liked the story overall. Only problem was the lack of measurements, weight or volume. I really had no idea how much the expansion was, kinda ruining the build up
Clownboat
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well written story. Don't worry about it being political. It's more of a light parody of political theater in general and isn't some kind of political polemic.  
SlutsRule
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written, good dialogue, al ostbelievable characters the most you can ask in a sexdriven, sizeist fantasy like this.rnAbout politics in FAP material rnFirst of all, Rule 34!rnSecond, if we can't make jokes and porn about politics, and semirecognizable politicians, then we are in more danger morally AND politically than a little fun porn could ever cause.rnThird  I was an early supporter of Ms Palin back in 2008, but I was also devoted to Photoshopped porn about her. Porn appeals to the lizard brain, and this lizard loves pornifying pretty much anybody, or anything.rnWay to go, ExPFCWintergreen! Write more!
MisterB
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good to see you writing again  I loved Dysmorphia found on deviantArt. It's wonderful to see well developed stories and characters that include BE. Looking forward to more.
Gnarl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Politics do NOT belong in Fap material.
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