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The Overflowing Bra

Alias_the_Archangel
jimmy.alger@gmail.com
Lucid Daydreams
A solo tale of a man trying to fill a need he didn't previously know he had.
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 bobinads
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Really welldone! I'm not a real assplay guy myself, but your description was excellent, and I enjoyed the TG elements, though it could be a bit hard to follow what exactly was a dream and what was not.
 hmmmmm
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 5 
The BE was sparse and was not the center of the story.  I like how you write though.. I would like you to write a BE centered story.
 BB47
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Meh.
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