The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Anonymous
TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Venus Club
Mail order club sends pills that make girls bigger.
Average Scores:
 defnotcis
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
simple and good
 Abistic
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Great story, very good descriptions.
 Hipstercat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
amazing writing and descriptions.
 wayno
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Excellent descriptions that entice the senses.
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