The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

JR Parz
Unknown
Unholy Desire
Jason uses a book of witchcraft to control and transform Tracy.
Average Scores:
 Oppai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This story was fun. I'll have to send it to a friend of mine. I only send the good ones.
 Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Another excellent story by JR.  My only complaints are that there wasn't enouth BE and I felt the story finished a bit quickly.
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