Continuation of "Big Changes for the Professor" Prof Lee comes back to college and 'infects' his TA and she in turn has an affect on her room mates. Part 1 -- more to come if people are interested.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.29
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.57
mysteryguy9215
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Its decent. Nothing I'd write home about. It follows similar tropes that countless other BE stories have banked on for a while. The characters are underdeveloped and bland. The chemistry between the two lead characters is nonexistent and only implied by the narrator. The sexual scenes are there, but seem contrived just for the sake of plot.
In one word meh. Needs a lot of work. If you can expound the plot, flesh out the characters, and create some kind of conflict, then you might have something here.
slooble
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep going. This is great stuff. Conceit is awesome.
Gnarl
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Seriously, why bring up politics in a fantasy. Boner killer of the highest order.
Beachball boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
PLEASE! Dirk, we need to know more!!! I can hardly wait!!!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent, can't wait to see more!
Gatrac1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Story, can't wait for more chapters
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A little short, but otherwise a great continuation. Please keep on with this series!rn
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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