There are big boobs, huge boobs, enormous boobs... and then there is Jessica.
Erik is quite surprised when a new student joins his university class, and he cannot help but be attracted to her rather unusual assets. Can he work up the courage to say hi to her?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.89
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 4.81
- Technical: 4.93
Muffin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely one of the best BE stories I have ever read, and that's saying something. I rarely comment on public posts like this, but this is just genuinely that good. The character writing came before anything else here, and that worked in the story's favor. It's really nice to read a story with actual genuine 3 dimensional characters, ones you can think of as actual people, and not just characters.
LFG
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Outstanding piece, I only wish it never ended
dd30
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is something incredible! The author is very talented and this piece of work is just outstanding.
LDQ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Vampirate
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely amazing
It reminded a bit of DDDDaves Claras Cleavage and that is high praise
5 out of 5 Hell I would give this story 6 if I could
S90
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
FANTASTIC I haven't enjoyed a story this much since Steve Palmers classic Blind Date
Although lacking in actual BE in the story the implied BE is fantastic and definitely sets the stage for further stories if the author so chooses I hope they do their work is fantastic
Someone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely superb writing style and I dont even usually like stories where the girl starts massive it always seems like there's nowhere to go
In this case I very much look forward to the next chapter
Chungus
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm so confused by stories that deride implants but seem to prefer all the attributes of implants. A good romance story besides that.
Queue
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story I love the human aspect of it, these are two moderately welldeveloped heh characters interacting with the huge tits. I would definitely read a sequel, and I'd love for there to be even offscreen, extremely slow growth.
Zang
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed your story hope to be able to keep on reading itD
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
One of the best I've read. Please write a chapter 2.
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Wellwritten. It wasn't clear to me at any point in the story exactly how big Jessica's breasts were, but I suspect that is because of the size involved. The buildup was longer than I would like, but you definitely succeeded in making me fall in love with Jessica before you got to the sex. I look forward to sequels maybe with flashbacks to increase the amount of BE?. Thanks for sharing!
All Powerful
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bobby
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
one of the best I have read.
Wy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Likeable characters and well written hope to see more of them
Foofhead
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent excellent excellent Characters were likeable pace was perfect and descriptions were on point Cannot sing this storys praises high enough
Agent Dee
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
as a LONG time fan of stories like this I really REALLY liked this one Even tho you never see her grow I like the backstory of how she developed early and got bigger and bigger and BIGGER as she got older It reminded me of the character Trish from the classic aforementioned Blind Date I would love to A see more of her as she gets older and BIGGER OR B maybe more of her as she was developing and developing and developing Awesome story keep up the GREAT work
Slyder
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Normally im a lurker but i simply cannot pass over this without letting you know this is truly the best story i have read in years This actually makes it in my top list of stories i will actually go back to and have saved a permanent copy as i never want to loose such a beautiful romp through not only the joys and wonder of those first dates with a girl and the expectation of how far things might go and really transporting me there but also combining that with the perfect description of size along with the beautifully developed characters that truly immerse me in this read through I remember also reading your A Rainy Day story many years back and considering that very well written as well and have always recalled wanting more of that wonderful 1v1 scenario from you This is really a perfect combination of the right choices of scene sizes approach positions etc as well as technically well executed This just tops what i already thought possible from you as it is somehow even better im serious when i say this ranks up with the greats like Steve Palmer and Richard O Steele in my book I really did also like the fact that you decided to focus less on the BE aspect for this particular piece which fits extremely well I rarely gush over such things as i really do like to give a good critique but its really difficult for me to find anything right now I urge you to continue writing more about Jessica and Erik
Phil
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was well written good characters and overall great I cant wait to see more work like this
stereo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Lex Bloom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
First the long awaited conclusion of the Arcology series and now this Youve set a high bar
In Awe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is quite simply the best BE story I have ever read The plot pace and dialog are perfect The characters are richly detailed and very well described Jessicas sassy and confident personality is extremely attractive in itself never mind her boobs For me recognising that there are many everyday difficulties to overcome with breasts this size is extremely important in making them believable I love the fact that you achieved this in so many places throughout the story If Im honest I find this aspect the biggest turnon I also like that J was able to take the difficulties in her stride That said there would undoubtedly be situations that are impossible and it would be good to get those in too Stuckage I thought the foreplaysex was expertly handled and really enjoyable to read I sincerely hope you choose to carry on with the story as it has the potential to run for ages More growth Fun in Eriks car Marriagekids Outstanding work such a great xmas present Thanks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved the story would like to see a second installment Please continue describing the difficulty that Jessicas breasts give her in attempting to do things
G
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoy all of your stuff A
Clovis
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This story was like the most wonderful kind of daydream Endearing characters wonderful detail and a general sense of naughty fun The best BE story Ive read in years and there really isnt anything but the mention of previous and future expansion Please do continue
Beachball boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow I couldnt stop reading it PLEASE more of Eric and Jessica
GeoffK
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice story No real BE in this segment but a great setup for any future sequels I hope that we have more stories detailing her continued growth Technically perfect and very wellwritten
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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