The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Master C
Unknown
Too Much
Splashed with a mysterious chemical, a girl grows insanely huge.
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 anon
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
     
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
A very good story let down by lack of character depth. While it is a good short story on it's own merits, the idea has a lot of potential IMO.
 dlurie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
One of my favorites
 Thunderchild
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Excellent story, shame about the ending though.
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