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Captured and transformed, a woman has her breasts enlarged.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.80
BAMA-HILLBILLY
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
IT CAUSED ME TO FANTASIZE , MADE ME FEEL LIKE I WAS ACTUALLY THERE WATCHING THE GROWTH.
Doctor X
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I felt as though I could see it happening.
Tony
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Same events,but with a man, would be good also
FS
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good device, introducing as a dream. Liked the bondage and the technical description of the BE process. Also liked the character's reaction to the BE and touching. Probably should be categorized as "WOW" rather than "Big".
Houston Toad
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I can't give it a bad character rating, because the characters weren't really important to the story, so a lack of character description is not a bad thing. It is a great bit of short fiction with incredible imagery.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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