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The Overflowing Bra

Quadhouse
quadhouse@yahoo.com
The Keeper part 7
Robert makes the waitresses and dancers in a nude bar bigger.  The two known groups watching him are shocked at the power he displayed.
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 Jimboditty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
When is the ready of the story going to be available? 
Awesome so far.  Keep up the good work. I liked the detail the plot, the character detail. Great work. 
 Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Awesome
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