The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Keeper part 7
Robert makes the waitresses and dancers in a nude bar bigger.  The two known groups watching him are shocked at the power he displayed.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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Awesome so far.  Keep up the good work. I liked the detail the plot, the character detail. Great work. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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