The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Elvish Wizard
Unknown
Wrath Of Freya, The
Goddess Freya decides to teach two girls a lesson.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Loved the idea. Want more!
  
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
 
 Herb Delight
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I'd like to find out Freya's further plans.
Please do another.
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