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A goth girl finds herself growing boobs for no explainable reasons, until her boyfriend figures out the devilish twist.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 5.00
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story. The mood was set perfectly, especially the protagonist's failure to maintain her rebellious and self-righteous attitude.
Lighfoot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I liked it, and I thought that her personality needed some softening, but I wasn't sure that it needed her losing control to her boss. Maybe if it had been someone she had seen as attractive before I'd have thought differently.
It's just the hot young girl who was just BE'd ends up having sex with her dirty old boss because she can't control herself. I know the story had a reason for it, but I think I would have liked it more if it had been something she wouldn't have nightmares about (if just for who it was with).
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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