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Huge-busted British schoolgirl Abigail gets a medical checkup.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.86
- Technical: 4.86
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
TEABAG
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
GTEAT STORY DAVE WHEN IS THE FOLLOW UP COMING ????? CANNOT WAIT
teabag
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great story when are you going to post the follow on story????
Hey, Steve!
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well, there's no BE in it, but it's definitely one of my favorite stories.
The Snake in the Empty Bottle
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like this story. The other one is even better. Good read. Thank-you.
Nick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A little casual, but good nonetheless.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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