The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Tigeras
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Breast Video Game Ever, The
Winning at a strange videogame brings unexpected prizes for a teenage girl.
Average Scores:
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Just really good for it's length. No complaints. 
 Big Dog
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Not bad, too short to be able to develop the characters and get propper BE description in
 Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
An alright story that came off as a bit short.
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