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The Overflowing Bra

Adrian Burns
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Aunt's Advice
Twelve-year-old Monique wants to grow bigger breasts than her arch-rival at school, and her aunt has some advice.
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 Jman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Love Monique! God, I'm such a perv...
 The Snake in the Empty Bottle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
The Snake in the empty bottle can not be impressed!  Thank-you for blowing my mind.  I love this story. I am impressed! One of the all time best.  And yes, I have read them all.  Thanks again.
 The Snake
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
One of my all time favorites.  Thank-you.
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