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A friendly but nearsighted witch messes up a magic potion.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.50
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Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Thanks for the news! Just was thinking about it! By the way Happy New Year to all of you:D
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Needs to be longer; you've got the beginnings of a great story here.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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