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Saving a magic man grants an artist the power to alter women's bodies - but it quickly gets out of hand!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.25
Above Ground Pool Prices
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!...
Mrletters
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Leeran
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
One of the first BE stories that I actually enjoyed reading, the quality, while not perfect was above and beyond the usual garbage you see, where the author switches between "I held my breath in anticapation..." and shortly thereafter it's changed perspective to "David reached out towards her supple bosom". In this case the story seemed well thought out, there was growth (pun intended) in the characters, which was a nice change and made the story all the more enjoyable.
So, if you just want a cheap fix, which is poorly written, badly thought out, and well, cruddy. Then look elsewhere.
But if you want a story that's good from start to finish then this could be what you're looking for. I also recomend Lipo which is also by Chimerianl.
axeman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
sex needed more intensity/detail. more sex encounters would have been nice. more comparisons of size during "growth spurts" would have made it better, but overall one of the better stories i've read on the site so far.(i'm new & am going thru them alphabetically.)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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