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The Overflowing Bra

Smurfinator
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Star Trek Voyager: Abreast of the Situation
Space radiation makes women on Voyager grow huge breasts.
Average Scores:

anotherMan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Its good. but its not arousing. he stays too true to the characters for this to be a really enjoyable BE story.

SL
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Truly, that was not only a great BE story, but a good story in all forms. I must say, this story had the required material needed for a BE story, but managed to keep a level head of maturity about such subject matter. The crew of Voyager was in character, reacting as one would imagine they would to such a problem. Always a plus. The humor was amusing and kept the story flowing, be it Seven telling Janeway about B'Elanna's Klingon metabolism had caused her to inflate at an insane rate or the good Doctor's suggestion of wheelbarrows for the female crew. And to top it all off, the story had a life lesson of sorts from Janeway's POV. One that was handled well and not forced upon the ready. Keep up the good work.

Protege
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved this story. The BE community needs more Trek BE. Also there need to be more stories about celebraties and TV shows ie: Smallville, Enterprise, and Angel.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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