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The original owner of the magical bra has kids, and now they're reaching puberty...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.33
- BE: 1.67
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.67
Notperv
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Ew wtf 4 boobs what a nasty ass fetish
Angry Pirate
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Horrible. Very underage characters. Someone dies instantly in a car accident. Unbelievable remarks from that person's mother. Too short for a BE story, but in this case that's a good thing because it was so bad.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
As good as it gets for a small piece like this. Descriptions were short, but then that's what imagination is for. I love this story, it's short, sweet and has a light hearted ending.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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