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The Overflowing Bra

Leviathan
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Another Magic Pill Adventure
Adapted from Leviathan's entries in the BE Adventure, this is more about Jim and his adventures with magic shapeshifting pills.
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 Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I changed my mind
 Leviathan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I think it's great.
 Not Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Of Course you would like it, your wrote it.
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