The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ed Miller
SRU: Can't Say No
Three wishes from a twisted leprechaun get a man transformed into his wife's ideal lesbian lover.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nothing beats finding out that your wife is bi-curious. You really know how to write good male-to-female stories.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Quite good. Some weak spots, but a lot of very good stuff.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

This is a great story with excellent attention to detail.

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