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The Overflowing Bra

Bad Irving
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SRU: Burglars
Eight unlucky burglars break into Spells-R-Us and pay for it in a variety of ways.
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 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Very entertaining. I wasn't a big fan of the male-to-female thing, but the part with Sandy and the Dickmeister was excellent!
 katikitten
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2 
some weird tense changes (sorry, bad grammar spoils a story for me). I would like to have had more background to the shop, and more development of the other characters besides the final three...Otherwise, most enjoyable!
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Quite a funny story all-round.
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