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The Overflowing Bra

Mr. B
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In a post-war world, a girl is chosen to be a wet nurse but soon finds herself part of a government plot.
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 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Your story was erotic, yet it contained depth and heart. Nice work!
 Kam
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
i enjoyed this. The beginning had great flow, but towards the end it lost the BE and only showed up here or there.
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