The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bob King
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Special Cargo
Serving as an aide to the Martian Ambassador leaves Mary in an awkward position.
Average Scores:
 zor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
good
 wvr
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
good
 katikitten
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Excellent! Great descriptions, nice progression. A bit more sex might have been nice, but overall, no complaints!
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Quite a good story all-round.
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