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The Overflowing Bra

Boobarian
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Snake In The Grass
Hiking into unfamiliar woods, a woman encounters a snake with a strange way of shedding its skin.
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OIIO
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

i read this awhile ago. it gave me some odd resounding feeling that i some how thought was weird. anyway if it can give you any post reaction it was written well. not that matters but the characters are a bit shallow, as i whould imagine are 'sapposed to be as it reads better that way.

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